User talk:123oxborough

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You nead to read about notability, reliable sources, and referencing for beginners. --David Biddulph (talk) 15:12, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

User:123oxborough/Generator Hostels
In terms of your article, there are two large issues. First, that the article as written is somewhat not written in a Neutral or Encyclopedic point of view, describing one of the properties as the most intimate is an opinion... Secondly, the references given are using the proper Wikitext mockup. See Help:Referencing for beginners. I would advise fixing these issues before submitting it.Naraht (talk) 15:22, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Generator Hostels (June 6)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dodger67 was:

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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 18:37, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Generator Hostels (June 17)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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LaMona (talk) 20:19, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Generator Hostels (August 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

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SwisterTwister  talk  21:24, 23 August 2016 (UTC)