User talk:123teddyme/sandbox

Hi Amelia! I really like the edits you've decided to make on this page. I think a lot of it was overly academic and inaccessible and your revisions to the History section make it a lot clearer and easier to read. I think the Words of Fire essay collection sounds really interesting and I’m glad you mentioned it. I think if you wanted to you could write another sentence on it, perhaps something about the content or a quote relating to intersectionality. As far as the Intersectionality as a religion section, I definitely get why you found it odd. It really seemed like an afterthought to me. I think your additions to it are really clarifying and helpful, but I also think you could delete the section altogether for the sake of keeping the article concise. Or, you could maybe move it to the In Practice section since it seems to be an example of intersectionality in practice as a lens through which you see things and speak. Overall, I think you’ve done a great job editing this article and it is already so improved from the original page.