User talk:124.29.230.14

April 2021
Hello, I'm Palindromesemordnilap. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Coal mining in Pakistan, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at the tutorial on citing sources. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. palindrome§ǝɯoɹpuᴉןɐd 06:11, 15 April 2021 (UTC)

Coal mining hazards
A report published in the Herald on the operations of coal mining is sufficient to understand how scary, ruthlessly exploitative, and environmentally hazardous the entire business is. Being a mix of personal stories and hard facts, the report sheds light on the intimate experiences of the colliers who have to work in oxygen-less warrens of shafts to make their ends meet. The report also laments the media for being selective in their coverage of coal mining operations in the following words. "If their death toll is high, media rushes to bring home the horror of it. What does not make news is the anguish of those in homes and hospitals who suffer and die in silence due to chronic conditions inflicted on them by occupational hazards of being in the coal mining industry. Nor does the human and environmental cost of mining figure anywhere in the policy debate over coal and development. The dilemma of coal miners is that they work underground, invisible to the rest of the world. A collier in Choa Saidan Shah in Punjab’s Chakwal district puts it eloquently: “We only become visible when we are dead.”
 * , thanks for providing the source! You can add it to the article if you want. Be sure to cite the source when you include it; here's a tutorial on citing sources.


 * Another note: make sure you're sticking to a neutral point of view (see WP:NPOV) in your edits. Some of the phrases you used, like "how scary, ruthlessly exploitative, and environmentally hazardous the entire business is" seem un-neutral. It's typically better to use facts to then let readers draw their own conclusions. For example, Coal_mining says, "In the US alone, more than 100,000 coal miners were killed in accidents in the twentieth century", rather than saying something like "coal mining is scary and incredibly dangerous".


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 * Happy editing! palindrome§ǝɯoɹpuᴉןɐd 06:32, 15 April 2021 (UTC)