User talk:128.230.253.23

November 2022
Hello, I'm Pizzaplayer219. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Paul Arriola, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Pizzaplayer219TalkContribs 15:29, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

Please do not add unreferenced or poorly referenced information, especially if controversial, to articles or any other page on Wikipedia about living (or recently deceased) persons, as you did to Ricardo Pepi. Thank you. Pizzaplayer219TalkContribs 15:30, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

Please stop adding unreferenced or poorly referenced biographical content, especially if controversial, to articles or any other Wikipedia page, as you did at Malik Tillman. Content of this nature could be regarded as defamatory and is in violation of Wikipedia policy. If you continue, you may be blocked from editing Wikipedia. Pizzaplayer219TalkContribs 15:32, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

So I think this edit and this edit are fine. But it comes off as editorializing when you use "controversially" or "Despite his prominent role..." Just state the facts and it's fine. Adeletron 3030 (talk • edits) 16:54, 15 November 2022 (UTC)