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To The Bluest Eye article I am going to add:

Proposed revisions to article:

- change the sentence which starts with because in the intro as I am not sure it is okay to start a sentence with Because - change the wording of some of the sentences in the summary paragraph as to me they do not make sense - I am also going to add a chunck to the adaptations section as "Guthrie brings Toni Morrison's 'Bluest Eye' from page to stage with poetic power" was not talked about in this page. I am going to add this because I think it is important to have a variety of adaptations at hand as well as this is a very recent production (2017). - I may add to the character of Frieda because I feel she deserves more than just one sentence - There are also characters missing such as, Henry Washington and Samson Fuller and I think it is important to add these characters in order to make the character list complete - I think I will also add to the controversy cases as I have found one from 2014 that is not on their however, I need to look for more information on it as I have only found a few sentences on it so far. I think it is important to have as many cases as possible to see how challenged this book is.

Bibliography: I found these articles during the Wikipedia research days in the library but am not sure whether I will use all of them yet

Censorship dateline: Schools.(2013). Newsletter on Intellectual Freedom, 62(5), 184-185. Retrieved from http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&AuthType=ip,uid&db=ofm&AN=102304898&site=ehost-live&scope=site

Censorship dateline: Schools.(2013). Newsletter on Intellectual Freedom, 62(5), 184-185. Retrieved from http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&AuthType=ip,uid&db=ofm&AN=102304898&site=ehost-live&scope=site

Keung Hui, T. (2014). Common core critics attack use of ‘The bluest eye’ in schools.

Schultz, C. (2013, Oct 06). Connie schultz: Let's ban the book banners instead. Sun-Journal (Lewiston, ME),

“Guthrie brings Toni Morrison's 'Bluest Eye' from page to stage with poetic power.” Star Tribune, www.startribune.com/guthrie-brings-toni-morrison-s-bluest-eye-from-page-to-stage-with-poetic-power/420264103/#1.

CCallagy (talk) 02:20, 21 November 2017 (UTC)