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116th Air Refueling Squadron
I noticed your account of the WWII exploits of some members of the 116th Air Refueling Squadron is not very calm and neutral, not very encyclopedic. The Bataan March prison escapee bit is especially rife with superlatives and peacock terms. Can you rework the text to take out the spin, to make it sound less like a coffee table book and more like a neutral encyclopedia? Thank you. Binksternet (talk) 01:53, 21 January 2011 (UTC)