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Your submission at Articles for creation: Leo Coupe (Flying Car) (August 23)
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Your submission at Articles for creation
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142.147.59.204 (talk) 20:22, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

Johannes, thank you for pointing out the Tesla's battery pack weight - while you are correct their 120kwh battery weighs about 400kg, I believe you misunderstood the statement "Tesla's 4680 cell architecture" and that misunderstanding will help me clarify it further in the Wikipedia writeup. By "4680 cell architecture", Leo Flight refers to the individual 4680 cells within a Tesla battery pack, where each cell weighs 355g As explained here, and in many other sources. The 400kg battery is comprised of thousands of these 4680 cells.

I will clarify the submission to better explain this difference, so others do not misunderstand. Leo Coupe will use a 66kwh battery pack that consists of Tesla 4680 cells, which are available to OEMs for integration in custom battery packs such as this.

Tesla's 400kg battery pack, like most automotive battery packs, has an aluminum and steel-reinforced enclosure. This style of heavy enclosure accounts for roughly 25%-40% of the battery's weight alone as explained here, and is not used in the eVTOL industry. Instead, eVTOLs use primarily composites such as carbon fiber and Kevlar for their battery enclosures, but it is dependent on each manufacturer and is not standardized as of this point in time.

Finally, before outright dismissing any claims as "highly unrealistic", look at existing items within the world. Lilium, among others, has an eVTOL with an even lighter empty total weight than Leo Coupe is projecting, as stated on your own website. and has similar performance figures with a greater lifting capacity. You will note that Lilium is an existing, multi-billion dollar manufacturer listed on the New York Stock Exchange. While very optimistic, Leo Coupe's co-founder Pete Bitar goes over all of this battery math in the New Atlas article I cited in my submission. Please read these sources before dismissing claims, as that is the whole reason they are included with these submissions.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Leo Coupe (Flying Car) (August 28)
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Devonian Wombat (talk) 01:57, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

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July 2024
Please refrain from making unconstructive edits to Wikipedia, as you did at Mary J. Blige. Your edits appear to constitute vandalism and have been reverted. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. Repeated vandalism may result in the loss of editing privileges. Thank you. Paul Erik (talk) (contribs) 01:33, 8 July 2024 (UTC)