User talk:144.80.4.112

I believe that you did a very good job with your bibliography and article draft. It is very in depth and gives an unbiased perspective of the game of softball. One thing that I would suggest though is that you give better names to the paragraphs that you are looking to create. Perhaps instead of just naming a paragraph "Ball", you could try to incorporate the differences between a softball and baseball into another paragraph titled "similarity to baseball". By changing the name, you could be more descriptive in what you are trying to portray. Also, I realized that you may have made an error when creating your paragraphs considering that you have two paragraphs titled "adding to history". A simple fix to this would be to simply combine the two paragraphs since they are on the same subject. Overall, I think that that you have many new contributions that would be beneficial to the article. I hope that my constructive feedback can help you make your additions to Wikipedia as good as possible. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mikedenezza14 (talk • contribs) 06:07, 20 October 2022 (UTC)