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Article Evaluation
The article Kidzania Tokyo, one of the Kidzania franchise has several points to be editied. The first paragraph seems to be okay because it offers general information about this amusement park. However, it says “children from the age of three to fourteen” are allowed to enter. From my working experience at the Kidzania, there are exception that allow junior-high school students who are over fourteen to enter. Therefore, it should be edited. Also, it mentions that Kidzania Tokyo allows to take pets inside the park, but I have never met those who with pets, and heard any detail policy that those who take their pets are excluded from the park in the case the pets are harmful, so that this information should have accurate references. Finally, the link of the website in references cannot be opened, so alternative resources should be added.

February 2018
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