User talk:14jungmokk/sandbox

kk It's a good start, I hope I can know more about it. 14sunghoonp (talk) 14:42, 17 May 2012 (UTC)

The article has very professional language. It is pretty detailed and you have added a lot of links in the page. You should post a comment in the talk page to tell the editors that the article is in development, or they would most likely take it down 14benl (talk) 01:58, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

Flash is supported Safari on Mac OS X, Flash is not supported on Mobile Safari on iOS. Instead of saying "Minion cannot run on any type of software developed by the Apple", you should try to be more detailed, such as Minion cannot run on the specific software or operating system. You can say Apple instead of "the" apple. Apart from that good structure. 14harryl (talk) 02:04, 14 May 2012 (UTC)