User talk:14jzl/Virotherapy/Bibliograpy

Wikiproject Medicine; UCF College of Medicine peer review
Great job with the wikipage 14jzl! Organizing each section (oncolytic virotherapy, viral gene therapy, viral immunotherapy) by mechanism, clinical development, and challenges is intuitive and gives the page a nice flow. The citations are appropriate and have working links. The page is readable without much unnecessary punctuation or run-on sentences. The mechanisms are explained with technical detail appropriate for the page, the clinical developments are up-to-date, and important challenges are mentioned.

Suggestions:

There are a few grammatical errors scattered throughout the page.

Oncolytic virotherapy) mechanism: What are some examples of receptors on tumor cells which viruses target? How does the tumor microenvironment prevent recognition by the host immune system? clinical development: What are some examples of the clinical trials? challenges: What are some flu-like symptoms? What are some of the "safety concerns"?

viral gene therapy) mechanism: Provide some examples of diseases that could be treated with viral gene therapy. clinical development: What are some of the "several other features" that make Adeno-associated virus attractive for use in viral gene therapy? challenges: What are some of the ethical implications of the technology?

viral immunotherapy) cancer treatment: This section needs some citations.

Overall, great job! Dsmerin (talk) 17:53, 27 January 2021 (UTC)