User talk:151.83.118.171

December 2022
Hello, I'm Theoder2055. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions&#32;to Nettie Metcalf have been undone because they did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use your sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Teahouse or the Help desk. Thanks. Theoder2055 (talk) 10:42, 10 December 2022 (UTC)


 * Theoder2055, the changes which I have supplied to the page concerning the life of Nettie Metcalf were constructive, removed incomplete or incompetent language and provided a fluent structural improvement.
 * The unaltered, approved-of sentence reads:
 * She is a descendant of William Williams, a Connecticut politician who signed the 1776 Declaration of Independence (i.e., a "Founding Father").
 * My proposed alternative reads:
 * She was a descendant of William Williams, a Connecticut politician and Founding Father who signed the Declaration of Independence.
 * Being that there was only one Declaration of Independence, it is redundant to include the date of its signing--the inclusion of the date implies that there were other similar such declarations made in different years than 1776. The "id est" statement in parentheses and quotations does not read soundly and can be replaced with minimal effort in a fluent and less redundant form. Please reconsider allowing these improvements. 151.83.118.171 (talk) 18:27, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Please don’t make unexplained changes as you didn’t use edit summary, otherwise it doesn’t appear constructive. Please use the edit summary to explain your changes by mentioning something like corrected grammer so that your edit doesn’t get reverted. Theoder2055 (talk) 16:37, 12 December 2022 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Nettie Metcalf! If you are interested in editing more often, I suggest you create an account to gain additional privileges. Happy editing! Theoder2055 (talk) 19:40, 23 December 2022 (UTC)