User talk:15darrylc/sandbox

Mayank's Review
This article is mostly well structured, and (until now, mind you) well written. You have only one source until now, and this may eventually be cause of your article's demise. I feel that the sections "Areas of Business" should be merged into the section "Corporate Affairs", which is basically the same thing. Good progress. Cheers:). 15mayankm (talk) 03:00, 13 May 2013 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 15mayankm (talk • contribs) 02:58, 13 May 2013 (UTC)