User talk:15drewb/sandbox

Drew so far article is coming along pretty good. I like the topic you picked. I would first recommend though you work out what your 3 sections will be because right now I only see one. I also think you need to work on your spelling and grammar because it seems to be lacking. I also think your content is quit brief and not that much maybe you can do some more research and add some more details. Overall I do like your article I look forward to read it when its complete. 15annaf (talk) 00:26, 21 May 2013 (UTC)