User talk:15fbur

November 2012
Hi. Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for working to improve the site with your edit to Blankets (comics), as we really appreciate your participation. However, the edit had to be partially reverted, because quite a bit of the material, such as the assertion of Craig's relationship with Phil, and which of their parents is the more strict, and the assertion that their father is "cruel", clearly constitute a personal point of view, and synthesis, which are prohibited by Wikipedia's policies on Neutrality and synthesis. Any assertion about a narrative work that is analytical, evaluative or interpretative requires citations of secondary sources.

Also, proper nouns like "Christian", "Phil", "Laura" and "Ben" are capitalized.

If you have any other questions about editing, or need help regarding the site's policies, just let me know by leaving a message for me in a new section at the bottom of my talk page. Thanks. :-) Nightscream (talk) 21:50, 28 November 2012 (UTC)