User talk:15maddiec/sandbox

Your article seems to be coming together very well! Based off your specifications, most of them have been met however you still need to add some photos and maybe add some more words so that it will be 500 words. Other than that, your article seems to be progressing very well, the grammar is correct and it has a very neutral point of view because it is very factual. Great job so far! 15sophieb (talk) 03:28, 13 May 2013 (UTC)