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For Feminist Perspectives on Sex Markets, the start is relevant and concise to the rest of the article. The writer doesn’t give too much detail about their topic but they give enough so that the reader isn’t confused as to what the writer is writing about or why. The structure of the article so far is chronological. The start of the article mentions feminist perspectives on different kinds of businesses in the sex market. The author starts with the type of feminism relating to the kind of business in the sex market. The writer introduces a specific feminist to further define radical feminism and argues how sex marketing prohibits gender equality. First, the author begins to use quotations around specific words the give a more neutral standpoint, but further into the article, the author uses evidence from a radical feminist to discuss the negatives about sex marketing.