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Your submission at Articles for creation: The Risk Factors and Treatments for Heart Disease (March 25)
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EROS message 08:09, 25 March 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Risk Factors and Treatments for Heart Disease (March 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bilorv was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:The Risk Factors and Treatments for Heart Disease and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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— Bilorv(c)(talk) 18:12, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Risk Factors and Treatments for Heart Disease (April 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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David. moreno 72   03:59, 22 April 2018 (UTC)