User talk:17150120J/sandbox

Jennifer's Peer Review - Caitlin
Overall, I think the information you have found will contribute great to the wikipedia article you have chosen. I would just say to keep researching as much as you can to add anything you think it helpful, I think you already have a good amount of content. Although, I am not sure how much we are supposed to be adding, but I think you have good, helpful information.Gentilec128 (talk) 14:52, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

Editing Suggestions- Emma
To begin, I think the three sources you used are all reliable and credible. I would post them in the talk page to make sure with other users that they are credible pieces of information to add. I like the section about the history, I think all of that information you are going to add is relevant and will help improve that section. I think the range section is super interesting about the prom dresses. There is a grammatical error, "There is couches" it should be there are couches. The losing freedom section is also interesting about what will happen to the people who currently live there. Another little grammatically error is "The land is own by the state of California" should be the land is owned. Overall, good information that you are adding.

Enaumann (talk) 15:00, 26 April 2018 (UTC) Emma Naumann