User talk:173.197.72.131

Hi, thanks for your message.

Your article is still available at Draft:Greg Herman Fashion Designer. A better name would be Draft:Greg Herman (fashion designer).

Here are some things worth considering before you resubmit your article.
 * 1) Please use inline references. See WP:ILC. Otherwise, readers can't tell where each fact is sourced from.
 * 2) Please cite references properly by using correct templates.
 * 3) The article should be neutral and encyclopedic, and should not sound like a promotional ad or resume.
 * 4) No original research, see WP:NOR. If you can't find it online via a reliable source, then it can't go on Wikipedia.

I see that you've cited some notable newspapers like CNN, the LA Times, and the NY Times, so your article may indeed be notable once you demonstrate it through proper referencing. Otherwise, no one can click on the links and will not be able to see the sources demonstrating notability (see WP:BIO).

You might also want to try discussing this topic at WikiProject Fashion to see if others would agree that Greg Herman is indeed notable. &mdash; Stevey7788 (talk) 19:27, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

Hi Stevey,

I hope you had a great weekend. Thank you for your thorough review and notes. I am having some difficulty navigating/ understanding how/where to make the necessary changes you pointed out. Would you be able to help me in making the necessary corrections? I wouldn't want to submit it then have it be denied. Any help you can provide would be greatly appreciated. Thank you again and have a wonderful Monday.

173.197.72.131 (talk) 17:57, 1 April 2019 (UTC)

Lorraine