User talk:173.240.249.204

Greetings, and welcome to Wikipedia! You will find it easier to communicate and collaborate with a usernamed account, rather than anonymously, but it's your choice.

As for Diana Dew, I just happen to be that last editor to make changes to the article -- some minor copy edits. The editor who contributed the bulk of the material has not been active recently. As you can see, the article has been flagged for tone. A Wikipedia article should read like an article you'd find in a reference book; DD's article shows evidence of the promotional magazine pieces that provide much of the references.

Considering references: secondary sources (newspaper reporting, books, independent web sites) are best. Unpublished personal recollections aren't that valuable. A quick internet scan for a DD obituary does turn up a bit of material, but not much.

It would be good to get a precise place and date of death for DD.

There's a lot more to editing, but maybe this note will help get you started. Good editing!

Dgorsline (talk) 17:20, 25 December 2021 (UTC)