User talk:173.68.22.17

Hello, I'm new to editing Wikipedia pages, and don't know how to flag a specific paragraph...my apologies. There is a paragraph in the "Courtship of Eddie's Father" section that needs a LOT of editing. Here is the text I'm referring to:

Brandon Cruz said of the show that developed a professional father-son relationship, compared to that of The Andy Griffith Show, "We dealt with issues that were talked about, but were never brought up on television. Bill wasn't the first actor to portray a single widowed father, but he became one of the popular ones, because of his easy-going way of this crazy little kid." Prior to Bixby's promotion to director, Brandon said, "He was looking for the best dolly grip, along with the boom operator that if something was called specifically and failed, Bill could be easily angry." On the kind of relationship Bill had wanted with his co-star, Brandon also said, "Bill would never speak down to me. Bill treated me as an equal. He made sure that we had a lot of time together, just so he could kinda crawl inside my head and see what actually made a kid tick." Upon the death of Bill's real-life father in 1971, Cruz stated, "He had that type of mentality that the show must go on, thinking it was just a great TV show, after he broke down weeping."[14]

It would appear that this was written by a non-native English speaker, and is barely intelligible in places. 173.68.22.17 (talk) 15:04, 6 September 2022 (UTC)