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Nice evaluation and good suggestions about what make the articles better. Jmmcabee (talk) 05:02, 18 April 2017 (UTC) jmmcabee

Comments on Ideas Draft
You have established your credentials and given some general ideas about what you could do on each page. Evaluate each article like you did for the botany and plant physiology articles. Then make a specific suggestion for a new or modified sentence with a reference. Jmmcabee (talk) 19:18, 26 April 2017 (UTC)jmmcabee

Your evaluation is much more complete now. I like your suggestion of a wording edit. The term "normal nutrients" is not one I'm familiar with. Does this mean the nutrients found in fertilizers. I will suggest not just working on the part of the article that you already have expertise in. This is a research project, so maybe you can add something about plant behavior when grown hydroponically. Jmmcabee (talk) 22:08, 28 April 2017 (UTC)jmmcabee

Comments on Article Revision
Looks well-composed. Make sure that you are staying neutral. Can you work in something about the physiology/ behavior of the plants when grown hydroponically? Maybe in a different section? This is a plant physiology class, so you should contribute something related to plant physiology. Jmmcabee (talk)jmmcabee —Preceding undated comment added 18:43, 10 May 2017 (UTC)