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(Talking about changes made to wiki/Gravity_(film)#Plot)

I must admit I am no expert as I add such an important part to the Plot description. This is why I have also added more details justifying my writing that Stone did in fact hallucinate, and that the matter is not really open to debate. I suppose you might either say the use of parenthesis is better to be avoided, or that the plot description should only give the general story without giving too much detailed information, but I cannot honestly leave this article with a "citation needed" over the fact that this was most certainly a hallucination. I will however not further interfere if anyone decides otherwise, as I might be missing something. It is after all an intellectually challenging movie.

The rest of my modifications really are nothing but minor changes in syntax, small mistakes about the storyline (for example, cutting the oxygen supply is not depressurising the capsule) and adding omitted events which could be considered significant (such as Stone and Kowalski hitting the ISS, which is one of the iconic scenes of the movie). I apologize about the large number of changes, I should most certainly have been more careful for a cleaner history list, but what can I do now.

And again, I am no expert, nor am I an English teacher. I look forward to seeing this article completed, as I believe this great movie deserves a good presentation on the world's largest Encyclopedia.

Oh, and one last thing, whatever changes you undo, please consider ending the plot description with the word "gravity". I think it would be a nice touch regardless of my mistakes.