User talk:189.216.97.168

January 2018
I appreciate that you are trying to improve the Santa Monica 13 article, but at the very minimum, your writing needs to be good English (grammatically correct, without every word capitalized). You should also provide sources for your claims. If you're not willing to do this, your changes will continue to be removed. If I can help, please let me know. Jessicapierce (talk) 01:37, 21 January 2018 (UTC)

March 2018
Hello, I'm Oshwah. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions —specifically this edit to Santa Monica 13— because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks.  ~Oshwah~  (talk) (contribs)   02:47, 11 March 2018 (UTC)