User talk:192.147.249.189/sandbox

Peer Review by Brianne
Areas of Success!
 * Great outline and discussion on the topic! Good information was added, it is obvious it was researched
 * Good structure with well thought out headings; information is clearly labeled and categorized so the reader can locate exact infromation
 * There is not any biased language; good neutral tone
 * Great info on the Hospital! This will be a good addition to the existing article
 * Good use of language and grammar. Every sentence is clear and to the point, allowing optimal reading experience for the target audience.

Areas of Improvement:
 * Make sure you cite sources unless you information will not appear to be valid on Wikipedia; as of now, nothing is cited
 * If you have more time to research, add more information on the successes and widespread outreach of the Hospital to the public

Overall remarks:
 * Great start! The information looks clear, well developed, and important to the subject matter. However, make sure you cite sources for every claim that isn't general knowledge and gives you validity in your argument. Good stuff, keep going!!