User talk:19lunaa

Hi 19lunaa!

I believe this is where we're supposed to introduce ourselves to a classmate. Hopefully, I'm right!


 * Hi! My name is Julia, and this is my wikipedia introduction!Julianoel (talk) 16:38, 13 September 2017 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, 19lunaa, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Women in the military
Hi! Your contributions to women in the military were reverted by with the explanation of "Partly unsourced; partly inaccurate to source; partly not clear why it's germane to entry (risks appearing to be POV-pushing)". I wanted to expand on this a little. It looks like it's a bit superfluous to the section. I think that if you had just included the information about the woman completing the infantry officer course and placed it in the same paragraph as the sentence of the first woman to enlist, it wouldn't have been so bad.

I've tagged Innisfree987 so they can expand on this a little more. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:39, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Also, make sure that the claims you add are explicitly mentioned in the source material - it should not only partially cover the claims. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:40, 29 September 2017 (UTC)