User talk:1onicCoval3nt/sandbox

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It's a well-written article! I would just be careful of run on sentences, especially in the prognostic biomarkers section. I had a hard time figuring out the clausal structure of the longer sentence. I would also add citations to each sentence using the wikipedia mechanism. RWakely99 (talk) 00:23, 14 February 2020 (UTC)

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It well put together. However, it could use some expansion in regards to the biotechnology aspect, how biomarkers are found/exploited/etc. Examples of specific biomarkers, or links to them might help clarify some points. Jhhayman (talk) 10:01, 15 February 2020 (UTC)