User talk:1will i am1/sandbox

Sarah's Review
I think the tone is really good overall, and the evidence is presented in a pretty unbiased manner. The evidence used backs up the claims very well, and the citations seem to be relevant and up to date. The only thing I'd change is to look over phrasing and reword a few awkward sentences, but the information is great and is well backed.Scheckelse (talk) 17:23, 27 February 2018 (UTC)