User talk:2001:4452:280:1A00:A1A9:190E:71D7:9218

Delfin Lorenzana
Your edits are appreciated, but please follow the Wikipedia Manual of Style and Manual of Style/Biography

1. A lot of your contributions, including entire sections, completely lack references or have too few references. One of the key policies of Wikipedia is that all article content has to be verifiable. This means that reliable sources must be able to support the material. Please check Help:Referencing for beginners

2. Don't write the article as a résumé. Include positive, negative, or neutral facts about the subject. Of course, supported by reliable sources. Do not promote the subject. Neutral point of view

3. In general, present a biography in chronological order. MOS:CHRONOLOGICAL

4. Please refer to the Manual of Style for language, layout, and formatting:
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Look at the articles of former United States Secretaries of Defense: Jim Mattis, George Marshall, and Mark Esper. Lorenzana's article should end up similar to the aforementioned.

Jollibinay (talk) 07:44, 11 February 2021 (UTC)