User talk:2001:8003:3A2C:9700:65A4:6558:1BB:4A7E

May 2023
Hello, I'm Spectrallights. I edited some of your recent edits to the plot of Palm Trees and Power Lines because they made the plot unnecessarily wordy. For example, in the first paragraph I removed the line "before returning to school" because it’s already stated that the film takes place during Lea’s last few weeks of summer and it can be assumed it’s her summer vacation before her schooling resumes. The bit about Lea’s friend flirting with Tom and Lea being jealous is also a minor detail that can be left out. The Manual of style on film plot advises to keep the plot summary to a brief length. In-depth detail is not needed for plot summaries. I also changed the vocabulary to American English as the film is American. If you think this was a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Spectrallights (talk) 17:49, 7 May 2023 (UTC)