User talk:201.203.174.252

January 2021
Hello, I'm B732. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions—specifically this edit to The House That Jack Built (2018 film)—because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Help desk. Thanks. B732 (talk) 04:27, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
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Hello B732. I'm surprised you didn't find my edit constructive. 'The film polarised critics' gets across all the information of the previous, windier version and does not include the line about 'feedback' from critics. Critics do not leave feedback; they write reviews. I think it's legitimate to make minor changes in this way to make articles more concise so they read better, and perhaps to improve others' contributions by example, but if that is not the case, do direct me to guidance stating otherwise. 201.203.174.252 (talk) 05:34, 22 January 2021 (UTC)NHS