User talk:2021DutchSailor

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Hi 2021DutchSailor, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like it here and decide to stay. Our intro page provides helpful information for new users—please check it out! If you have any questions, you can get help from experienced editors at the Teahouse. Happy editing! DC &#124; Thank you (talk) 14:26, 27 June 2021 (UTC)

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Some unasked for advice, worth every cent you paid for it. Creating a WP-article that "sticks" can be very hard, especially without any prior experience in, just, editing WP. Still, it can be done, if.

Now, I have not tried to check your sources to see if the topic meets the demands at WP:BASIC, but presumably you have. If WP:BASIC can't be met, you have wasted your time. If the draft is accepted, anything that doesn't fit the Biographies of living persons policy will be removed sooner or later, for example names of wife and children, unless there are good (per WP:RS) references that mention them.

Assuming your references are good enough, your next hurdle is inline citations. You have to get the refs into the body of the text at the right places. WP:TUTORIAL and Help:Referencing for beginners can be of help. Happy editing! Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 09:51, 27 June 2021 (UTC)

Question
WP:Conflict of interest, a WP-guideline, strongly discourages "contributing to Wikipedia about yourself, family, friends, clients, employers, or your financial and other relationships." Do you fall in that category? Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 10:36, 27 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Apologies for late reply. I'm feeling my way around the WP user infrastructure. In answer to your query: I'm totally unrelated to naval architect Peter van Oossanen, the topic of my article submission to WP. I don't work for him. I know him through work (I'm a yachting media journalist) and have reported on his achievements. "~" 2021DutchSailor (talk) 09:40, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Good enough and no apologies necessary. Your draft is now at Draft:Peter van Oossanen, if that was unclear. WP:SELFCITE could be worth a look. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 10:06, 28 June 2021 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Peter van Oossanen has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Peter van Oossanen. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 10:33, 28 June 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Peter van Oossanen (July 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qwerfjkl was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Peter van Oossanen and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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. &#8213; Qwerfjkl talk  16:55, 11 July 2021 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Peter van Oossanen has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Peter van Oossanen. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 16:29, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Peter van Oossanen (December 13)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Missvain was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Peter van Oossanen and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Peter van Oossanen, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Db-g7" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Peter_van_Oossanen Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Missvain&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Peter_van_Oossanen reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Missvain (talk) 23:14, 13 December 2021 (UTC)


 * Dear Missvain,
 * Thank you for taking time to read my draft Wikipedia entry on Dutch naval architect Piet van Oossanen. I have reworked the draft since your comment dated Dec. 13, 2021. I kindly ask if you can revisit the item and consider the rewrite. 2021DutchSailor (talk) 15:36, 7 January 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Peter van Oossanen (February 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DoubleGrazing was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Peter van Oossanen and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Peter van Oossanen, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Db-g7" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Peter_van_Oossanen Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:DoubleGrazing&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Peter_van_Oossanen reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:35, 23 February 2022 (UTC)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 12:02, 26 July 2022 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Peter van Oossanen


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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Hey man im josh (talk) 11:44, 23 August 2022 (UTC)