User talk:212.129.87.125

Hi
Hi. And welcome. Thank you for your contributions to the Timothy Quill and Timothy J. Murphy articles. A couple of quick points of note that might be of interest.
 * 1) CFORK. It is best if we don't have substantively the same content replicated across multiple articles. More than 80% of the Timothy J. Murphy article is a near verbatim copy/paste from the Timothy Quill article. This doesn't align with our WP:CFORK, WP:SS and WP:COPYWITHIN guidelines.
 * 2) COATRACK. The current construction (of both articles) means that there is significantly WP:UNDUEWEIGHT given to one aspect of each subject's career. Effectively making the articles a WP:COATRACK for the content you have added about broader events.
 * 3) OFFTOPIC. The current content of both articles (now) spends almost as much time (and in one case more time) dealing with topics only loosely related to the subject. Akin to an article about JFK being 80% or more about the Cuban Missle Crisis.
 * 4) PRIMARY. Most of the sources you seem to rely upon are (as well as being very difficult for anyone to find or WP:VERIFY given the unclear notation style) WP:PRIMARY sources. Newspapers. While primary sources are useful for quotes or events, they are less reliable for analysis of those events. Are there any books or secondary sources available?

In general I wonder if be possible, perhaps, to deal with the events in a single or separate article? And refer to that article within the articles on the above two subjects? With a summary of the subject's involvements in those events? Ideally with reference to secondary sources? Guliolopez (talk) 21:10, 4 March 2020 (UTC)

November 2021
Hello, I'm Serols. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions—specifically this edit to National Party (Ireland, 2016)—because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Help desk. Thanks. Serols (talk) 13:27, 22 November 2021 (UTC)