User talk:216.110.126.205

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Happy editing! Drm310 🍁 (talk) 17:47, 19 April 2022 (UTC)

"Break Through: From the Death of Environmentalism to the Politics of Possibility" section
So clearly (subject line) is Shellenberger's second book. However the section devoted for discussion of this seems inappropriate: there is more critique than synopsis and the critique appears to be justifying itself. Critique is necessary, but not to this extent given the paucity of book content synopsis. It appears that whoever wrote this book section was doing so to proactively refute its content rather than attempting a truncated summary.

There was more information about why critics think prioritizing technological innovation (Shellenberger's claim) is a poor policy choice than the actual claim(s) Shellenberger made in this book. "Environmental justice" seems to be presupposed as the optimized solution here (and maybe it is), but this claim is made on behalf of critics without including why the author rejected this idea. To keep things neutral either both perspectives should be presented equally or not at all.

Apologies in advance if this is made in some error, i am new to the talk/discussion page. 216.110.126.205 (talk) 10:51, 19 April 2022 (UTC)


 * This is your user talk page. If you want to discuss the content of a particular article - in this case Michael Shellenberger - then you should use the article's talk page. Otherwise no one will notice or reply to your comments. Please try posting this at Talk:Michael Shellenberger. Thanks. --Drm310 🍁 (talk) 17:47, 19 April 2022 (UTC)