User talk:216.47.50.42

The article on Gustavo Gutierrez contains the sentence "his methodology is often critical of the social and economic injustice he believes to be responsible for poverty in Latin America and the clergy within the Catholic Church." This is confusing. When I read it, it seems to say "he believes to be responsible for . . . the clergy within the Catholic Church," which makes no sense. What is intended? Maybe, "his methodology is often critical of . . . the clergy within the Catholic Church"? If so, it should be clarified, maybe in two separate sentences, or in some other manner, such as repetition of "critical of" to make it "his methodology is often critical of the social and economic injustice . . . in Latin America, and critical of the clergy within the Catholic Church."216.47.50.42 (talk) 05:13, 18 July 2021 (UTC)