User talk:23b brown

Your submission at Articles for creation: David A. Sadoff (July 31)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by StartOkayStop was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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StartOkayStop (talk) 05:55, 31 July 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: David A. Sadoff (July 31)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Akevsharma was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:David A. Sadoff and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:David_A._Sadoff Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Akevsharma&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:David_A._Sadoff reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Akevsharma (talk) 16:01, 31 July 2022 (UTC)