User talk:23hjt/Grace Akallo

There are a lot of missing links on this article (I've identified them in the article's talk page and on the peer review page), so I would recommend trying to either find a new link that actually connects to the intended webpage, or find new webpages with the needed information. I would also add information about her education to her bio box because as it is it just looks like she's a child soldier and nothing else. I would create new headings in the article to help demonstrate that she has done something with her life because just being a child soldier. SJack4 (talk) 20:23, 18 April 2020 (UTC)SJack4