User talk:24.16.16.116

July 2019
Hello, I'm Viewratio. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Kristoff St. John, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. If you need guidance on referencing, please see the referencing for beginners tutorial, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Viewratio (talk) 06:13, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
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Help me!
Am Frank K Sloan, I represent Lola St. John, Kristoff's minor child and heir, and I made changes to Kristoff St. John's page because the information was INCORRECT, and I made the corrections, can some one assist me in making sure this information STAYS, if the wrong information continues to be used, I will have no other choice but to demand his page be taken down. I hope someone will call my offices and assist me in this, his daughter reviews this page and is upset that the incorrect information is on his page. Thank you in advance….

fks1sloanpllc@gmail.com 425-802-8305

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24.16.16.116 (talk) 19:31, 4 July 2019 (UTC)
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 * While you can demand that the page be taken down, that demand won't be acted on. Please point out what, exactly, is incorrect. If I take your changes here, the main points of contention seem to be:
 * Whether Kristoff St. John's place of death is Los Angeles or Woodland Hills
 * Whether it is correct to refer to Maria St. John as his mother
 * Whether his wife's last name is "Richardson" or "St. John"
 * You also added content about Arlene M. Fitzula-Culver, but since the article previously didn't say anything about her, what we had cannot have been incorrect. Now in all three of those disputed issues the version before your changes is confirmed by the New York Times obituary. "Los Angeles" clearly wouldn't be incorrect anyway since Woodland Hills is a part of Los Angeles. Regarding his wife's last name, I assume "Richardson" was her maiden name? In that case you introduced an incorrect piece of information: Kristoff St. John's wife's name, during the marriage and afterwards, wasn't "Richardson" but "St. John"; she still uses that name. That leaves us with the "mother vs. step-mother" issue. While Marie indeed is his step-mother, if this source is to believed (and I see no reason to doubt it), Kristoff St. John routinely referred to her as "my mom", and the vast majority of news sources I checked, from the NYT to Fox News, refer to her as his mother, too. His biological mother, on the other hand, seems to have been pretty much a non-entity in his life, without any influnence and for the most part without any contact. While it may be debatable whether Marie St. John should be referred to as his step-mother, adding content about Fitzula-Culver, particularly content that's entirely irrelevant to Kristoff St. John, is inappropriate. Even for just her name we would need better sources than birth records; compare WP:BLPPRIMARY (while St. John unfortunately is no longer alive, the recently deceased are treated by Wikipedia in the same way as the living).
 * Please also note that if you are editing Wikipedia as part of a paid job, the Terms of Use require that you disclose employer, client and othe relevant affiliations. Huon (talk) 21:08, 4 July 2019 (UTC)