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 * 1. Is each fact referenced with and appropriate, reliable reference ? A lot of the facts on Fleury's Wikipedia page are referenced to the appropriate pages. For example with all of the teams that he has played for the all have links that take you right to the teams page so that you can get information on the team. Another example is with all the national teams and awards that he has received it has links that give information on the year that it occured and some of the other specifics. One piece of information that I don't see cited is the part where it says that his annual golf tournament raised 1 million dollars to go toward the Crohn's and Colitis Foundation of Canada.


 * 2. Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? is there anything that distracted you? I think that all the information displayed on Fleury's Wikipedia page is all relevant to his life and what he has done and went through. the topics that are shown are his early life, playing career, off ice contributions, career statistics and awards. All of these topics play roles in describing who Theoren Fleury is and what he has done in hockey and outside of hockey. I don not believe that there is anything distracting about Fleury's page I think everything is relevant and is displayed very nice that flows well.
 * 3. Is there viewpoints that are overrepresented? Are there view point underrepresented? I don't think that there are points that are overly represented over others. I do think that there is a lot of information about his life in hockey which is because that was his career. I think that there needs to be more information about his life as of now off the ice and more information about the advocacy programs that he is associated with. Theoren Fleury was a good hockey player but what he is doing now with telling his story and his involvement off the ice is what is making his name eve bigger. I think that that part of his life may be a little underrepresented and should be brought to light more Vandenbr 98 (talk) 21:01, 15 March 2018 (UTC)