User talk:2424SiSa

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Style and mark-up
Hi 2424SiSa, thanks for your work on Our Lady J. By looking at what we call the diff, we can see your changes to the article.

While your work is very much appreciated, you've made some style errors. Let's go through them.
 * You removed the short description and templates
 * We don't mention photographers, unless it's a notable person
 * We don't use capital letters, like for job descriptions.
 * You changed the URL template to plain text, now it's not clickable
 * There were two other pictures, you could've used them still
 * The headers and flow don't make sense:

Contents 1	Biography 2	Early Career 3	TV and Film Career 4	Personal Life and Activim 5	Filmography 5.1	Director 5.2	Writer 5.3	Producer: 5.4	Actress:


 * The section called biography is mainly about her achievements or awards, that can have its own section called 'awards', after the rest of her biography
 * The article is a biography. Early career is followed by TV and film career, but her earliy career is also about TV and music video work.
 * Again, we don't use unnecessary capital letters, same goes for section headings


 * We write albums in italics, like so. You can do that by using '' before and after you want in italics.
 * There's no space before a reference
 * You seem to know how piped links work, but you don't have to incorporate mark-up in one, like “We Exist”, that should be "We Exist" . Similarly, we use straight apostrophes – ' and not ’ – so RuPaul’s Drag Race is not correct
 * What I don't understand, for some reason you've made piped links for Patti Lupone and Caleb Hearons ; those are not their names.
 * A lot of sentences are missing periods

Could you take another look? If you're not up for it, I'll edit the article. Thanks, and happy editing. soetermans. ↑↑↓↓←→←→ B A TALK 07:18, 21 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi 2424SiSa, I see you've edited the article some more but haven't incorporated my suggestions. Replying is also the kind thing to do. soetermans . ↑↑↓↓←→←→ B A TALK 07:37, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi there! Apologies for the late reply and thank you for the suggestions! Feel free to make any edits you'd like. I thought I'd have time to do them myself but haven't just yet. Thanks again for offering to help! 2424SiSa (talk) 03:06, 23 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi 2424SiSa, thanks for your reply. I'll try to get over the article soon. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. You can also notify me (or another user) by using this template:, and replace "username here" with the username in question. Thanks, and happy editing.  soetermans . ↑↑↓↓←→←→ B A TALK 08:59, 23 January 2023 (UTC)