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Article Evaluation
New Orleans article The history that was listed in the article is very vague, and does not really achieve and acknowledge the deep history of the city of New Orleans. Article stated that the city was founded in 1718 which is often disputed as i read in another article. The tone of the article is relatively neutral as it lays facts out directly while connecting the information;nonetheless, the information given could be deeper in content, and this would increase efficiency of the article. The Drainage and flood controlItalic text section can be further developed adding content on how to city has improved its flood control since the article had been established, and the incident of inefficient flood control in the city, and how it affected it. Also, the weather section should be re-evaluated and updated. Some sources about Katrina are biased, so these sources need to be updated and replaced by neutral sources.