User talk:2601:240:8300:F780:E5CD:7403:E22C:8669

This is a solid start on an article about Film Editing. When I first came across it, however, it became apparent that there is a lot of informal writing and personal opinion in your paragraphs, specifically the lead paragraph. I would improve that by eliminating any kind of speech that would make the article seem as it was not from a legitimate source. To that same point, I would also improve the lead paragraph by adding citations. Wikipedia articles aren't to be written like a personal essay, but rather, more of a scholarly article with no personal opinion involved. These are just a couple of tips to further improve your experience with Wikipedia and all it has to offer! --Lnwrigh2 (talk) 22:06, 12 October 2015 (UTC)