User talk:2601:4A:C000:C020:A141:1D6D:65A8:7DE2

The opening lines are poorly written: "Bosco Chocolate syrup was purportedly invented in 1928 in Camden, New Jersey, by an unknown physician.[2] The William S. Scull Company, founded in 1831 in Camden, acquired the manufacturing license."

How can a company founded in 1831 acquire a license for something invented in 1928? It is possible, but the text should be re-written to avoid the mind-boggling effort to make sense of it.

Specifically, (1) when was the mfg license initially created? Presumably sometime between 1928 and the present.

(2) Best would be to put the "acquired license" into a separate sentence. Otherwise, something like: "The William S. Scull Company, [add] WHICH WAS   founded in 1831 in Camden, acquired the manufacturing license [add] IN [YEAR]."

Also, I'd suggest cleaning up this sentence: "The Scull Company's most famous product was Boscul Coffee, which gave the product its brand name, "Bosco"."

"The Scull Company's most famous product was Boscul Coffee, which  WAS THE BASIS FOR  the product'S  brand name, "Bosco". 02:31, 1 July 2020 (UTC)02:31, 1 July 2020 (UTC)