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AfC notification: Draft:Presearch has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Presearch. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 00:56, 19 May 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Presearch (May 19)
 Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Presearch Articles for creation help desk] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Robert McClenon was: This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft reads like an advertisement, but Wikipedia is not for advertising.

Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and is written in the formal third person. The use of either the first person plural, the voice of a company or organization, or the second person, addressed to the reader as a prospective customer, is unacceptable and is blatantly promotional. Pages written in the first person plural or the second person may be tagged for speedy deletion, and may even result in promotional accounts being blocked.

The language in the Key Differentiators section is unambiguously promotional and is entirely out of place in Wikipedia. There is enough substantive content so that this draft is only being Rejected and not tagged for G11. If anything resembling this draft is resubmitted, a topic-ban may be requested.

This draft has been Rejected by a reviewer in the Articles for Creation review process. DO NOT resubmit this draft or attempt to resubmit this draft or prepare or submit a draft that is substantially the same as this draft without discussing the reasons for the rejection. You may request a discussion with the rejecting reviewer, or you may request a discussion with the community at the Teahouse. A discussion will not necessarily agree to a resubmission. If this draft is resubmitted, or an attempt is made to resubmit this draft or an equivalent draft, without addressing the reasons for the Rejection, a topic-ban or a partial block may be requested against the submitting editor, and the draft may be nominated for deletion.

You may ask for advice about Rejection at the Teahouse.

Robert McClenon (talk) 01:00, 19 May 2021 (UTC)