User talk:2603:8080:1300:1300:7419:CA4B:BBEC:3826

March 2023
Hello, I'm EDG 543. I noticed that you recently removed content from Jeff Brown (judge) without adequately explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an accurate edit summary. If this was a mistake, don't worry; the removed content has been restored. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Thanks, EDG 543 (message me) 03:46, 25 March 2023 (UTC)


 * (1) The other dates in the paragraph include month and year, but not day. I see no particular reason to include the fact that yesterday's opinion was decided on March 23, 2023 rather than merely in March 2023. The extra information actually strikes me as clutter.
 * (2) The paragraph does not state which judge wrote the panel majority opinion in April 2022. So, again, I think consistency is a virtue. And it strikes me as rather unusual/unnecessary to specify which judge wrote the en banc majority opinion.
 * (3) It's silly to cite an AP News article to support the assertion that "Judge Andrew Oldham wrote the opinion for a 10-member majority." The preceding sentence cites the opinion itself, from which it can be readily (and directly) gleaned that Judge Andrew Oldham wrote the opinion for a 10-member majority.
 * (4) Suggested change: "On March 23, 2023, the Fifth Circuit, sitting en banc, affirmed Judge Brown's nationwide injunction. [20] Judge Andrew Oldham wrote the opinion for a 10-member majority.[21]" --> "In March 2023, a ten-member majority of the Fifth Circuit, sitting en banc, affirmed Judge Brown's nationwide injunction.[20]" 2603:8080:1300:1300:7419:CA4B:BBEC:3826 (talk) 04:22, 25 March 2023 (UTC)