User talk:315da

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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft_talk:Spending_on_education_%2B_domestic_resource_mobilisation_in_Cuba

Peer review: This is a good start and an interesting topic. Good selection of sources and well structured. I think it would be helpful to expand on the sections and provide more analysis and information. Could also use a read-through for spelling and grammar mistakes. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Elesaturner (talk • contribs) 17:44, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Positives

1. Well written and well structured article

2. good headings and subheadings

3. Appropriate use of infobox and in text links

4. Wide range of sources of different types

Possible Improvements:

2. Some questionable language e.g. "coloured people" (isnt acceptable in references to POC) - just double check that all language is appropriate in the UK

2. Could include more images to further demonstrate key points

3. A couple grammar, punctuation and spelling mistakes - just read over again

4. Information in intro paragraph that's not included in the main article just make sure its a summary not new information