User talk:321ben

Terry Pratchett
I've reverted the change you made to Terry Pratchett because it appears to be in contradiction with the referenced source. Specifically, you changed the wording from "small improvements" to "no improvements", while the source indicates that he "showed a small, but measurable, improvement in his condition after three months". If you can provide a reference that indicates that there was no improvement, please provide it. Thanks. -- BeezHive (talk|contribs) 20:27, 9 February 2009 (UTC)

This article refers to a TV program shown in the UK. There is no reference to a source article currently in the paragraph. How can I reference what is said in a TV Program? 321ben (talk) 23:04, 10 February 2009 (UTC)


 * You might want to take a look at the  template.  Ideally, if you can find a stream version of the TV show on the internet (from the BBC site, etc), that would be ideal - it makes fact verification easier.  At any rate, I would not remove the "slight improvements" bit unless the doctors from the original article have rescinded their findings. It might be worth changing the wording around to better indicate the skepticism of the scientific community (if such skepticism is prominent).  -- BeezHive (talk|contribs) 04:28, 11 February 2009 (UTC)