User talk:333-blue/Archive 16

14:30:23, 1 May 2016 review of submission by DCMarshal02
Thank you, the article is brief mention of an area of land with significant local history, due to it's placement during the Victorian gold rushes of 1850-55. Dates and comments re events came from David Horsfall's book (ref listed). Several notations were made by myself from knowledge gained living for 30 years beside the location. In what ways might I improve this article to make it acceptable? Thank you, Mark.
 * Try to add some independent sources from news, the page, WP:referencing for beginners, may help you.  333-blue  23:05, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

10:10:54, 4 May 2016 review of submission by RobbieIanMorrison
Dear User:333-blue,

I'd like to explain why I believe this page to be notable and useful.

I want to first point out the page is intended to be a gateway page, capturing the terminology, and the referring to other more substantial pages on energy storage, power-to-gas, and so forth.

I cite four substantial academic references. There are not more in English to my knowledge because the term power-to-X derives from Germany.

I would like to point out that the equivalent German page (https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Power-to-X) exists. That page has five addition academic references in German. I am reluctant to cite these because I don't believe foreign language material to be that helpful.

In summary, given the recent nature of the term, I believe I have cited sufficient references to make it notable. Particularly given the definitional nature of the page.

Can you reconsider your decision?

with best wishes, Robbie Morrison
 * If you would like to make it a disambiguation, I may accept it, so that is my suggestion.  333-blue  11:55, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

06:01:19, 5 May 2016 review of submission by 182.71.107.22
Hi 333-blue,

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Impelsys

Can you please point out specifically which words/sentences have the problems? I'm not able to identify them.

Orphan article
Hi 333-blue,

For the article : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rigobert_Roger_Andely

There is this message "This article is an orphan, as no other articles link to it. Please introduce links to this page from related articles; try the Find link tool for suggestions."

I don't understand why it's there.. it's not there in the french version and there articles where there is a link pointing to it. Could you help please? Thank you in advance.

01021981aka (talk) 11:15, 5 May 2016 (UTC)
 * The French and English articles are independent, so it is not unusual for articles in various languages to ha e various maintenance tags. In this case, the English article Pacifique Issoïbeka links to the article, so I've removed the template. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 12:11, 5 May 2016 (UTC)

Draft:National_Institute_of_Hydrography
The institute is notable as it is national institute of India and one of the major naval establishments of Indian Navy. KC Velaga ☚╣✉╠☛  11:33, 9 May 2016 (UTC)

05:00:13, 11 May 2016 review of submission by Brad Brock Baran
Brad Brock Baran (talk) 05:00, 11 May 2016 (UTC)Thank you for your suggestions on the article I have been working. I changed and added footnotes as suggested, changed one website that was a better fit, and added one poem link. I addressed the citation link changes as you suggested. I acknowledge the time spent by reviewer 333-blue (you) and LaMona in restructuring this article and its footnoting. Thanks for that input. Thank you for re-reviewing this.

DYK for Jeremy Lin
— Maile (talk) 13:11, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

Tennistz engages with disruptive editing on French Open 2016
I have to revert without properly undiscussed over the WTA rankings with seeds as of May 16th 2016. There, I made a report on the warned user in Administrator's noticeboard/Edit warring. If you want to join the discussion, give a comment. ApprenticeFan work 14:01, 15 May 2016 (UTC)

23:34:08, 16 May 2016 review of submission by 47.54.17.184
Robert, I also left links to CBC - The Canadian Broadcasting Corporation. Perhaps if I rewrite the article with their prose?
 * Try to add more in-depth third-party sources other from wikias.  333-blue  08:46, 24 May 2016 (UTC)

05:51:00, 17 May 2016 review of submission by Shahidishadkam
Hi 333-blue, may you help me for guidance about my user page format and declining it? I tend to establish my user page for gathering all improvement and created pages. but i don't know the reason and what nobility must be comply in this pages. i have two new page for creating also but about this, I haven't other idea.


 * , that page is perfectly fine as a userpage, so it does not need to go through an approval process. So I have removed the header. Just to be clear, this does not mean it is acceptable as an article, so it should not be moved from its current location. I think you understand this already, but I'll say it just to be sure. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 06:10, 17 May 2016 (UTC)
 * ,Thank a lot. I found it.

(talk) Amir Shahidi 15:53, 17 May 2016 (UTC)

Done.
I fixed the wikitable on Draft:TVPaint for you. 68.2.123.163 (talk) 05:41, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Okay, I fixed it just like you said. 68.2.123.163 (talk) 05:53, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

00:18:03, 19 May 2016 review of submission by Julie Bif
Hi there! I am new to the Wikipedia world and not sure exactly what I need to make footnotes on? Any help would be appreciated!! :)
 * please see the 10th section on this page.  333-blue  08:37, 24 May 2016 (UTC)

Draft:TVPaint
Hey, I just fixed the wikitable in the Versions section on Draft:TVPaint. Did you see? 68.2.123.163 (talk) 09:50, 20 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Yeah, it looks better.  333-blue  10:02, 20 May 2016 (UTC)

AfC decline reasons
Hi. Could you try to give slightly more detailed reasons for declining AfC submissions than you did here? "Be sure to meet the Wikipedia guidelines" is not particularly helpful to a new editor - which guidelines specifically? The author of the draft had to ask at the Teahouse to find out why the draft had been declined. Cordless Larry (talk) 05:44, 23 May 2016 (UTC)
 * I second Larry's comments and would like to draw your attention to this discussion. I did not name you there because I do not want to embarrass you, but I think you should consider finding a different area to work in other than reviewing other people's work. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 00:22, 24 May 2016 (UTC)

Request on 17:05:14, 23 May 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Timothy Beck of Torrance
I think I am now working in the wrong edit classification. I now just want to edit in a few words and several references to an existing heading, i.e. Oil spill/Clean-up and recovery/ solidifying. I want to thank my previous reviewers for trying their patients.

Thank you for being patient and editing. I am asking people like William Anderson of Earth Guard Technologies in Georgia to send me newspaper and journal articles about oil solidify contracts and jobs Earth Guard or others have done. I have asked other chemists like Professor Mario E. Baur, Ph.D. my P-Chem teacher in graduate school and Dr. Rimmon C. Fay. co-inventors of this what I am determined to be "Public Domain" technology

I was put under a secrecy contract with Arco Marine Inc. (AMI) as part of the settlement agreement to a demonstration contract for oil spill freeze salvage with my company RTSC then (1993).

It was demonstrated by high school science teachers on the research vessel Vantuna of Occidental College in L.A. Harbor in 2002 how 50 lb. dry ice blocks can be drilled and strung-on-a-line to demonstrate Bubble stream, induced surface current oil spill herding and whirlpool containment (the radius of the whirlpool must be greater than the depth of the water and works to 50 feet). I have tried without success to demonstrate to (1) LAFD, (2) L.A. Harbor Commission, (3) USCG and (4) Hmeland Security for putting out harbor oil spill fires, but an entry in Wikipedia could change this? I tried top demonstrate how dead fish could be herded out of King Harbor and was almost arrested for obstruction because the incident commander at an oil spill, natural disaster or fire is under stress to follow established protocols.

As it turned out, B.P. was not allowed to buy AMI by U.S. Federal regulators, but the same AMI lawyer, Susan Liebson, who wrote the AMI/RTSC contract lied to me and said That B.P. owned by AMI settlement agreement and I was not allowed to to keep writing Sir John Browne, CEO of B.P. any other B.P. people or she would take me to court for the liquidated damages ($15,000, court costs and more) just so you know why I did not show up for the B.P. Deep Horizon oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico, but William E. Anderson and Earth Guard did show up to the B.P. Deep Horizon spill where he demonstrated for national television viewers oil spill freeze salvage off water and sand.

Heal the Harbor Research Institute channel on YouTube has an 8 minute video called Oil Spill Freeze Salvage or Google: Oil spill freeze salvage one is also directed to this video.

THE SOLUTION TO THE CA DROUGHT may be found on Wikipedia under the heading Flexible barge and I found the Sragg Bag entry written by the inventor, so I believe that Wikipedia does allow the original inventor the chance to tell the story directly sometimes as long as references are there, but I now just want to add a few words and a few references to the existing, "Oil spill/Clean-up and recovery/ solidifying" headings?

Timothy Beck of Torrance (talk) 19:10, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Timothy Beck of Torrance (talk) 17:05, 23 May 2016 (UTC) Timothy Beck of Torrance (talk) 17:05, 23 May 2016 (UTC) Timothy Beck of Torrance (talk) 18:12, 23 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Try to add some more third-party in-depth sources from news.  333-blue  08:32, 24 May 2016 (UTC)

20:09:32, 23 May 2016 review of submission by Timothy Beck of Torrance
I am trying to abandon an attempt to add a new listing, : Oil Spill Freeze salvage and edit the existing header, Oil spill/ Clean-up and recovery/solidifying to read, "Solidifiers are composed of tiny, dry ice pellets [55], [56], [57] and dry hydrophobic polymers that both adsorb and absorb."

Timothy Beck of Torrance (talk) 20:09, 23 May 2016 (UTC) Timothy Beck of Torrance (talk) 20:50, 23 May 2016 (UTC)
 * What did you mean?  333-blue  08:28, 24 May 2016 (UTC)

Request on 20:27:35, 23 May 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Julie Bif
Hi! I have been working hard on getting a lot more references for Mr. Graham Guest. I have placed and linked them all in draft. However, I am having a hard time understanding why they aren't listed in references after I have linked them? Please help! I am a first time Wikipedia editor and am stumped right now!!

Julie Bif (talk) 20:27, 23 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Try to add more in-line citations as possible! (0 when this comment is placed)  333-blue  08:30, 24 May 2016 (UTC)


 * can correct me if I am wrong, but I think she is trying to tell you that she doesn't understand how to do add in-line citations. She said "Please help! I am new" and your reply is "try to do it". That is a completely useless reply.
 * I don't know how many times I need to say this, but if you are unable to give people useful reviews and advice, then you should stop reviewing articles. Julie, I will help you fix the article. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 00:08, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

My article you reviewed.
Could you please elaborate on what you mean by mix references? Also, please elaborate on the reason for rejection... The artist meets multiple wiki criteria for musicians. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brandonlalonde1234 (talk • contribs) 09:52, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Mixing references from the same URL in one.  333-blue  10:16, 28 May 2016 (UTC)

As in the link is broken? Please provide more information. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brandonlalonde1234 (talk • contribs) 21:54, 28 May 2016 (UTC)


 * You may like to use  in the first one, and the others use  .  333-blue  00:02, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Please publsih this article. Kashmir Window is famous online news magazine in kashmir
Please check Draft:Kashmir_Window again. Kashmir Window is a famous magazine in kashmir. I am from the same region. It is monthly as well as news website in kashmir. You can check in the list of news websites in kashmir page on wikipedia List of news websites in kashmir Thank You In Advance Kashmirlife142260 (talk) 06:02, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

13:12:37, 30 May 2016 review of submission by Irvnik
I am trying to upload my first article and have found the guidelines on notability to be a bit cryptic. Could you offer some more detailed guidance as to how this article could be published. Thanks.

06:13:23, 31 May 2016 review of submission by Irvnik
Dear 333-blue,

The draft article has been further explained with more references included. Please review again and advise further on eligibility for publication. Thank you.

Regards, Irvnik