User talk:50.53.20.137

August 2023
Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. Although everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia, please note that there is a Manual of Style that should be followed to maintain a consistent, encyclopedic appearance. Deviating from this style, as you did in Michael Eisner, disturbs uniformity among articles and may cause readability or accessibility problems. Please take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. Per policy MOS:EDITORIAL, use of adverbs such as "tragically" can impart an impartial tone, which should be avoided as "Wikipedia should not take a view on whether an event was fortunate or not." Wikipedialuva (talk) 05:37, 8 August 2023 (UTC)


 * The phrasing I changed it from was "as luck would have it...", which must also be considered to be "taking a view on whether an event was fortunate or not", especially when referring to someone dying. I have no affection or connection to the person who was mentioned as dying (didn't even know who he was until that day), but reading that entry here just struck me as absurdly callous. Calling a death "tragic" seemed just descriptive to me, but I'm fine with just leaving it as "Coincidentally". 50.53.20.137 (talk) 08:24, 15 August 2023 (UTC)